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这也是个老早争议的题目了
B选项--夹心修饰在语法上是有问题的。不明确ambiguity而且逻辑混乱。
如果修饰前 ...
这个解释博大精深（可能是我年老变笨），总之，我从昨晚捉摸到现在忽然明白了前辈的解释。。。在此谢过。。。
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这也是个老早争议的题目了
B选项--夹心修饰在语法上是有问题的。不明确ambiguity而且逻辑混乱。
如果修饰前 ...
再看A, them 在指代什么？只能是illustrations，可偏偏这里它在插入语里面。、
而这里偏偏用了VING modifier，那么这个VING是谁发出的，只能是BP
一个结构打破了两个层面，你有见过这种用法么。
（coordinating---BP发出： them指代另一个modifier的illustrations ）
这也是错的
那么请问正确答案C，In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinate with her illustrations,BP capitalized.......中 which she carefully coordinate with her illustrations修饰illustrations,但其she 指BP不也是打破了两个层面吗？
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这也是个老早争议的题目了
B选项--夹心修饰在语法上是有问题的。不明确ambiguity而且逻辑混乱。
如果修饰前 ...
能问一下D如何解释吗？
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单词会了，此题，毛的争议都没有其实。
单词：illustrations插图，narratives描述；capital on = use 利用，keen犀利的
会了这些单词，猪都会，拼接这两个逻辑
she carefully coordinate illustrations&&with her narratives 图和描述人来配套
D项人和narratives去协调了，语法没错，语意逻辑错；E选项：协调配套的动作和利用犀利的观察和爱，这两个动作不是啥并列关系，语意因为犀利的观察和对世界的爱才会做到精细的图文配套，应该是因果逻辑更讲得通一些，反而讲成并列关系了，故语意逻辑错了
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这个题我做的时候也是不明白，后来才想明白了。这个题考的试修饰，关键在于删除插入语和防止夹心修饰。先从A开始吧，直接删除in her book illustration, 结果发现句子少了谓语，A错。然后B，B是夹心修饰，这样是非常不好的（不能说错），它的结构是：修饰1，修饰2，主语谓语宾语。问题出在修饰2既可以修饰主谓也可以修饰修饰1，看见这样的就可以直接跳过了。C修改了这个错误，which从句直接修饰illustration。D里面coordinated错了，修饰主语的话应该是ing。E直接删除in her book illustrations, 然后后面them不知道在说什么。
注意如果in her book illustration在前面，那就不能删。再举一个例子，关于插入语。
El Nino, the periodic abnormal warming of the sea surface off Peru, a phenomenon in which changes in the ocean and atmosphere combine allowing the warm water that has accumulated in the western Pacific to flow back to the east.
(A) a phenomenon in which changes in the ocean and atmosphere combine allowing the warm water that has accumulated
(B) a phenomenon where changes in the ocean and atmosphere are combining to allow the warm water that is accumulating
(C) a phenomenon in which ocean and atmosphere changes combine and which allows the warm water that is accumulated
(D) is a phenomenon in which changes in the ocean and atmosphere combine to allow the warm water that has accumulated
(E) is a phenomenon where ocean and atmosphere changes are combining and allow the warm water accumulating
中间那个the periodic abnormal warming of the sea surface off Peru直接删，因为是插入语。然后ABC都不对因为in which 和where从句导致句子少成分。然后Ewhere不对。所以是D。
再举一个关于夹心修饰的例子！
Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, a technique called proton-induced x-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it, is finding uses in medicine, archaeology, and criminology.
(A) Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, a technique called proton-induced x-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it,
(B) Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, having the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it, a technique called proton induced x-ray emission
(C) A technique originally developed for detecting air pollutants, called proton-induced x-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it,
(D) A technique originally developed for detecting air pollutants, called proton-induced x-ray emission, which has the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance quickly and without destroying it,
(E) A technique that was originally developed for detecting air pollutants and has the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance quickly and without destroying the substance, called proton-induced x-ray emission,
B选项就是夹心修饰，修饰1，修饰2，主谓宾。
大家讨论一下CD选项，好像也是夹心修饰：主语，修饰1，修饰2，谓语宾语。修饰2可能修饰到修饰1.
最后E里面called很有可能修饰到substance，所以不好。
A是最好的它的结构：修饰1，主语，修饰2，谓语宾语解决了夹心修饰的问题。
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这个题我做的时候也是不明白，后来才想明白了。这个题考的试修饰，关键在于删除插入语和防止夹心修饰。先从 ...
觉得A 没有缺谓语啊
还有A是不是夹心呢？
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这也是个老早争议的题目了
B选项--夹心修饰在语法上是有问题的。不明确ambiguity而且逻辑混乱。
如果修饰前 ...
想要请教以个问题。。。&&C 中in her illustrations ，her放在开头不会存在无所指代嘛？
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觉得A 没有缺谓语啊
还有A是不是夹心呢？
第一题中：
El Nino （主语）, the periodic abnormal warming of the sea surface off Peru（主语的一个修饰，可以想象成并列关系）, a phenomenon（宾语） in which changes in the ocean and atmosphere combine allowing the warm water that has accumulated in the western Pacific to flow back to the east.（宾语从句）
所以A的简化就是
主语+主语同位语+宾语+宾语从句
A不是夹心修饰因为第二个修饰是修饰宾语的。
Originally developed for detecting air pollutants（修饰主语的分词）, a technique called proton-induced x-ray emission（主语）, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it（主语从句）, is finding uses in medicine, archaeology, and criminology. （谓语，介词宾语）
简化：修饰1+主语+修饰2+谓语+介词宾语
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第一题中：
El Nino （主语）, the periodic abnormal warming of the sea surface off Peru（主语的一个 ...
谢谢您的解答，但是还是想问下A的谓语问题：
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on...
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
in her book illustrations是插入语，暂且删掉不看；carefully coordinating them with her narratives可以理解为是ving表伴随嘛？主句是BP capitalized on...
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104. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on
her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating
them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully
coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix
Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinated them with her narratives and
关于A 选项，会产生coordinating 修饰illustrastrasions 的歧义，但是我认为 in her book illustrations作为插入语根本可以删去不看，怎么会有歧义？同样B选项In her book illustrations是个状语，但是这貌似是什么夹心修饰。。不太清楚。E选项中OG说The participial phrase does not clearly modif这里的coordinated 是动词吧？就算有问题也是讲coordinate作为动词与captalize 并列改变原意，所以OG 的解释不清楚了
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这个题我做的时候也是不明白，后来才想明白了。这个题考的试修饰，关键在于删除插入语和防止夹心修饰。先从A开始吧，直接删除in her book illustration, 结果发现句子少了谓语，A错。然后B，B是夹心修饰，这样是非常不好的（不能说错），它的结构是：修饰1，修饰2，主语谓语宾语。问题出在修饰2既可以修饰主谓也可以修饰修饰1，看见这样的就可以直接跳过了。C修改了这个错误，which从句直接修饰illustration。D里面coordinated错了，修饰主语的话应该是ing。E直接删除in her book illustrations, 然后后面them不知道在说什么。
注意如果in her book illustration在前面，那就不能删。再举一个例子，关于插入语。
El Nino, the periodic abnormal warming of the sea surface off Peru, a phenomenon in which changes in the ocean and atmosphere combine allowing the warm water that has accumulated in the western Pacific to flow back to the east.
(A) a phenomenon in which changes in the ocean and atmosphere combine allowing the warm water that has accumulated
(B) a phenomenon where changes in the ocean and atmosphere are combining to allow the warm water that is accumulating
(C) a phenomenon in which ocean and atmosphere changes combine and which allows the warm water that is accumulated
(D) is a phenomenon in which changes in the ocean and atmosphere combine to allow the warm water that has accumulated
(E) is a phenomenon where ocean and atmosphere changes are combining and allow the warm water accumulating
中间那个the periodic abnormal warming of the sea surface off Peru直接删，因为是插入语。然后ABC都不对因为in which 和where从句导致句子少成分。然后Ewhere不对。所以是D。
再举一个关于夹心修饰的例子！
Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, a technique called proton-induced x-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it, is finding uses in medicine, archaeology, and criminology.
(A) Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, a technique called proton-induced x-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it,
(B) Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, having the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it, a technique called proton induced x-ray emission
(C) A technique originally developed for detecting air pollutants, called proton-induced x-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it,
(D) A technique originally developed for detecting air pollutants, called proton-induced x-ray emission, which has the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance quickly and without destroying it,
(E) A technique that was originally developed for detecting air pollutants and has the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance quickly and without destroying the substance, called proton-induced x-ray emission,
B选项就是夹心修饰，修饰1，修饰2，主谓宾。
大家讨论一下CD选项，好像也是夹心修饰：主语，修饰1，修饰2，谓语宾语。修饰2可能修饰到修饰1.
最后E里面called很有可能修饰到substance，所以不好。
A是最好的它的结构：修饰1，主语，修饰2，谓语宾语解决了夹心修饰的问题。
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ding..............
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顶。。。。
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楼主把你认为的插入语去掉，看看them怎么指代。变成无所指了。
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楼主把你认为的插入语去掉，看看them怎么指代。变成无所指了。
我是这么想的，不知道哪里有问题：
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
当看them 指代的时候，因为前面只有一个复数名词所以指代的只能是illustrations，因而不能去掉看。但是看coordinating 的时候，不能看到分词前面的逗号就把他当做作状语的成分，前面不是一个完整的句子所以其实coordinating 作的是一个定语的成分，此时我就考虑因为有两个逗号把中间那部分插入语去掉。
不过其实转个念头想想，为了表达的更明确明显吧in her book illustration 放前面比较好，让coordinating 直接跟在B P 后面
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这也是个老早争议的题目了
B选项--夹心修饰在语法上是有问题的。不明确ambiguity而且逻辑混乱。
如果修饰前面的book illustrations，那么book illustrations能发出COORDINATE么？
再看后面，这里有个analogy。
我们可以说：
Slipping on the ice, I hurt my ankle.
但不能说：
On the playground, slipping on the ice, I hurt my ankle.
这个句子&slipping ...&到底是跟着前面的&playground&还是跟着后面的&I hurt my ankle&？所以很awkward.
如果是跟着后面的&I hurt my ankle&，那么就是
adverbial modifier #1, adverbial modifier #2, main clause.
你有见着两个同时修饰同一个句子的adverbial modifiers就那么用逗号串联么？
再看A, them 在指代什么？只能是illustrations，可偏偏这里它在插入语里面。、
而这里偏偏用了VING modifier，那么这个VING是谁发出的，只能是BP
一个结构打破了两个层面，你有见过这种用法么。
（coordinating---BP发出： them指代另一个modifier的illustrations ）
这也是错的~~
如果不看插入语这个句子就fragment了~~后面capitalized on
her keen observation and love of the natural world.孤零零的。
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这也是个老早争议的题目了
B选项--夹心修饰在语法上是有问题的。不明确ambiguity而且逻辑混乱。
如果修饰前 ...
明白了，谢谢指点
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这也是个老早争议的题目了
B选项--夹心修饰在语法上是有问题的。不明确ambiguity而且逻辑混乱。
如果修饰前 ...
NN在问你个问题，下面是Manhattan的原文，红字部分是我的困惑，又来麻烦你了哈
?if the focus of the construction is the ACTION, then you must use the POSSESSIVE form for the noun/pronoun preceding the &-ing& participle. since that's fatally awkward to say in words, I'll provide an example:
everyone laughed at me accidentally walking into the girls' bathroom --& WRONG.
sorry. this sentence would actually mean that everyone laughed at me as they were walking into the girls' bathroom. （我认为这句话错误的表达了大家是在嘲笑我而不是嘲笑我这件事，但是再怎么说walking into修饰的是me 吧？怎么能说actually mean that everyone laughed at me as they were walking into the girls' bathroom. ？这样的话需要comma了吧？）
everyone laughed at my accidentally walking into the girls' bathroom --& CORRECT, because it's the action (my walking into the bathroom, not really me) that they're laughing at.
?incidentally, if the focus of the construction is the NOUN (or pronoun) itself, then you don't use a possessive. for instance:
i saw him walking down the street --& correct, because it was him i saw, not his walking action. this sentence is, however, ambiguous, because either he or i may have been the one walking down the street. （walking 修饰的应该是him吧。。。？）
i saw his walking down the street.-- wouldn't be incorrect, but it would be a bit strange, unless I'm a modeling scout who actually analyzes the gait of random strangers as they walk down the street
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