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【慢速美音模仿秀☆130817】印尼囚犯购买服务引重视(2/2)
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&节目说明：本节目为沪江听写酷的配套发音模仿节目。每期节目选取当日【慢速美音听写】材料中30秒左右的音频，详细文本可见当日【慢速美音听写】&由于小编时间和精力有限，不能对所有沪友上传的音频进行点评，因此采用如下点评标准：&1、声音清楚、洪亮。&2、在递交音频之前至少已经跟读模仿了至少20遍，基本特征为：句子读得基本流畅、语调和原文大致接近。&3、在节目当天递交音频。&注：当天指的是：如听写材料标题日期为9月10日，则所有沪友在9号晚上10点——10号晚上10点上传的音频。&4、上传音频对所有沪友开放。因为点评数量有限，如果设置了“仅楼主可见”，那么其他参与沪友只能看到小编的点评，却听不到音频。这样就白白浪费了一次汲取经验的机会。&5、符合以上条件的沪友，会按照回复楼层从上到下进行点评。每期每个小编至少点评10名，大家要珍惜机会噢。&注：考虑到有一些沪友会提前抢占楼层，随后才递交音频。因此，实际点评顺序以小编值班时的音频楼层顺序为准。&&今日点评小编：&岩见泽（Dominik）本期节目完整版听写地址：& 30秒音频： 小编模仿音频： & 模仿文本：He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners.&Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods. 译文：他（利奥普德·苏达佑诺）说那些支付不起这些东西或者是没有家庭帮助的囚犯需要在监狱里服侍其他的囚犯。印度尼西亚的监狱腐败、拥挤、经营不善且缺乏资源。监狱看守每月赚300美元。他们还能靠允许囚犯使用手机及其他违禁物品而获利。
重点单词发音讲解： & & &UU助阵：
prison&\'pri-z?n\ → prisoner&\'priz-n?r,&'pri-z?n-?r\ corruption&\k?-'r?p-sh?n\ guard&\'g?rd\ resource&\'rē-?s?rs, -?z?rs, ri-'\ 读音请移步：
&今日点评嘉宾：&（目前看起来比较悲惨orz只有两个音频，但是让我们一起把楼下填满吧！【喂！） &金荷娜&模仿音频：无法录音，但可以点评的哟~ &Melare&模仿音频：还在录中~ &uusaino&模仿音频： &bilibili233 模仿音频：
Now it's your turn：模仿朗读并上传音频&&&&
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He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.谢谢老师
(闭关两年~)
JIANJIA789说：沙发啊
逆袭了只能说原来坐沙发的那位没来抢。。。
(ID是个问题)
猫猫好~['pr?zn] 后面不要发成/zin/，另外多了个/s/；[k?'r?p??n] 发错成cooperation的感觉了，跟小D多读几遍吧；
金荷娜说：猫猫好~['pr?zn] 后面不要发成/zin/，另外多了个/s/；[k?'r?p??n] 发错成cooperation的感觉了，跟小D多读几遍吧；谢谢
(绝对不熬夜，一定要早起)
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
感觉第一句好平淡，好吧T。Tthese things 念得好绕口，不会
新人求指导~~谢谢各位么么哒
(Smile~Smile~Smile)
哇~freedom~在偶楼上~
(绝对不熬夜，一定要早起)
我是新手哦说：哇~freedom~在偶楼上~哈哈，第一次抢到板凳，好激动，好开心，不得不说，刚刚好紧张啊
(Smile~Smile~Smile)
freedomsyj说：哈哈，第一次抢到板凳，好激动，好开心，不得不说，刚刚好紧张啊是滴是滴~紧张~
(绝对不熬夜，一定要早起)
噢，发现of好像发错音了
(Smile~Smile~Smile)
freedom中午好~感觉乃的r发的不够卷。。。反正我是深受其害的。。还在联系中。。。
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
昨天仓促后补了一个讲解音频，你可以再去听一下，对照下自己读的，然后修正一下。
(绝对不熬夜，一定要早起)
uusaino说：昨天仓促后补了一个讲解音频，你可以再去听一下，对照下自己读的，然后修正一下。谢谢UU小编呐，努力改正，努力练习，每天进步一点点，O(∩_∩)O~
(Smile~Smile~Smile)
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(绝对不熬夜，一定要早起)
不得不说，大家刷的都好快
(走到时间的尽头)
小新中午好~ O(∩_∩)O（加个表情活跃下气氛）1.things的s好像被吃啦 肚子饿了嘛2.operation的重音读错啦 在字母r这边 /ɑp?'re???n/3.lack /læk/ 没有/?/的音哦声音还是很好听~
(Smile~Smile~Smile)
闪烁的金莎说：小新中午好~ O(∩_∩)O（加个表情活跃下气氛）1.things的s好像被吃啦 肚子饿了嘛2.operation的重音读错啦 在字母r这边 /ɑp?'re???n/3.lack /læk/ 没有/?/的音哦声音还是很好听...哈哈~谢谢小金莎~喜欢乃有条理的点评~啊哈哈~话说乃的喉咙咋样啦?
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
(Smile~Smile~Smile)
uusaino说：[flv]好感谢uu小编~讲的好仔细呀~谢谢乃~偶会继续加油滴~希望乃多来给偶指导~木马~
(慢V标V我回来啦。)
听UU点评的，好多细节，慢慢消化哟~一起努力~
：He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.严重来晚了，粗门连着好几天够不到电脑，沪江~~想死我了呢，回来乖乖练几天听力口语也就开学了呢~~ee，大家都加油~~嗯呐，咳咳，当然，继续求大家来拍砖袄~~
(绝对不熬夜，一定要早起)
cara说：：He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving o...亲，上午好~~says好像最后应该是z，好吧= =，其实我自己也错了，can't pay 中间貌似有s的发音，渣渣只能发现这么点~
(走到时间的尽头)
小cara我记得你不是说已经开学了嘛..话说我大学也在大连念的~poor /pu?/ /?/的音吃掉了~operation 这个单词字母o的发音要注意下 美音和英音有小的区别 英音 /?/ /呕/ 美音 /ɑ/ 贴近于 /啊/声音还是很棒~
(Smile~Smile~Smile)
cara说：：He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving o...cara中午好~偶在乃楼上~resources中最后的e读/?/，uu有提到哦~
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
cara说：：He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving o...
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.阿泽辛苦了，咱前两天也热伤风了，好在发现得早，恢复啦~多喝水，然后关掉空调，稍稍运动下，发发汗，感冒就不见啦~
(Smile~Smile~Smile)
嘿嘿~都守着刷屏在哦~
kobe1212说：队长~Hey Bro,welcome back！
我是新手哦说：嘿嘿~都守着刷屏在哦~刷屏常常有，沙发特别少啊~
(绝对不熬夜，一定要早起)
看楼主的名字还以为是女生，一听音频发现是好有磁性男声，O(∩_∩)O~~
freedomsyj说：看楼主的名字还以为是女生，一听音频发现是好有磁性男声，O(∩_∩)O~~唉，伤不起的ID，以后就把我想象成武士吧，像樱花一样一生灿烂却短暂。花是樱花，人是武士。嗯，这样就解释得通了。
(绝对不熬夜，一定要早起)
草瞳幻樱说：唉，伤不起的ID，以后就把我想象成武士吧，像樱花一样一生灿烂却短暂。花是樱花，人是武士。嗯，这样就解释得通了。哈哈，感觉ID的解释好幽默啊，花是樱花，人是武士
freedomsyj说：哈哈，感觉ID的解释好幽默啊，花是樱花，人是武士这是谚语，很严肃的哦~
(Smile~Smile~Smile)
偶也觉得名字解释的很有意思很幽默哦~叫乃樱士咋样~【偷笑】找了半天~resources中的最后的e读/?/，uu有提到的~
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
uusaino说：[flv]你这么一说我才发现自己都不知道上腭在哪儿，舌位也经常是不知道，仅仅是凭着听起来的感觉去模仿，看来得找个视频或者图例看看，仔细研究一下，多谢指点哈~你好像感冒了，空调别打太低，适当时候可以排排汗，有助于热伤风的恢复~
uusaino说：[flv]resources那里听了小D的单词读音是重音在后，就没按照原音频去模仿，这个问题之前在标V那边“老杨”也提到过，有时候会出现播音员的读音改变原有的单词重音音节的问题，有时候会让人有些困惑，之前模仿的时候被指出读错了重音，后来就一直按照小D读了，今天你指出来后，我感到有些茫然。
(慢V标V我回来啦。)
很好额，留名~
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
草瞳幻樱说：resources那里听了小D的单词读音是重音在后，就没按照原音频去模仿，这个问题之前在标V那边“老杨”也提到过，有时候会出现播音员的读音改变原有的单词重音音节的问题，有时候会让人有些困惑，之前模仿的时候被指出读错了重音，后来就一直按照小D...别茫然，我的内功绝对没有杨嫂的强，所以我是以绝对服从去听和模仿原音频的，当然也有不服的时候哈哈，这全取决自己，我说resources这个单词的时候有个前提的，就是以模仿为前提的，这是真的，所以你千万不要茫然，这全部取决于自己以哪个为侧重点。
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
草瞳幻樱说：resources那里听了小D的单词读音是重音在后，就没按照原音频去模仿，这个问题之前在标V那边“老杨”也提到过，有时候会出现播音员的读音改变原有的单词重音音节的问题，有时候会让人有些困惑，之前模仿的时候被指出读错了重音，后来就一直按照小D...另外，你别只看标的那个重音符号，你再多听下小D怎么读，其实小D读的那个音和原音频没一点冲突。
(不喧哗 自有声)
草瞳幻樱说：唉，伤不起的ID，以后就把我想象成武士吧，像樱花一样一生灿烂却短暂。花是樱花，人是武士。嗯，这样就解释得通了。看到你的新解释不知道为什么就让我对着电脑一通狂笑
bilibili233说：看到你的新解释不知道为什么就让我对着电脑一通狂笑好吧，看来我的ID要成为沪江网一个玩不坏的梗了……
uusaino说：另外，你别只看标的那个重音符号，你再多听下小D怎么读，其实小D读的那个音和原音频没一点冲突。还真是的，难道这词是双重音？
(不喧哗 自有声)
草瞳幻樱说：好吧，看来我的ID要成为沪江网一个玩不坏的梗了……这梗蛮好的 有个人风格 别人想要还没有类
(走到时间的尽头)
uusaino说：别茫然，我的内功绝对没有杨嫂的强，所以我是以绝对服从去听和模仿原音频的，当然也有不服的时候哈哈，这全取决自己，我说resources这个单词的时候有个前提的，就是以模仿为前提的，这是真的，所以你千万不要茫然，这全部取决于自己以哪个为侧重点。我发现是不是内功小有所成的人都有内伤 杨嫂音频各种咳 UU姐是鼻炎~
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
草瞳幻樱说：还真是的，难道这词是双重音？re·source 1
n.Pronunciation:
'rē-?so?rs, -?zo?rs, ri-' 这就叫多音字吧啊哈~~~两种读法都可以。排第一个的，应该是比较普遍的读法吧，我就喜欢按第一个来。都行的，没有问题滴~~
(走到时间的尽头)
怎么我听得几次阿泽亲都在感冒 用生命讲冷笑话太敬业了 注意身体啊~今天中饭吃完 发现一尖锐物卡主了喉咙 吃完晚饭发现好像下去了 现在咽口水又开始痛了~这严重影响了我的花挥 为了广大亲友 明天去医院检查下算了~He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(初心を忘れず。)
咦，不会吧！我记得我都很久没感冒了啊！→→你一定是被尖锐物卡得出现幻觉了！！为什么不去治疗？？【阿泽泥垢！你也好好注意身体嘛，祝你的喉咙早日恢复哟：）
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
亲爱的，我今天也给阿泽凑了个讲解音频，你听一遍，然后琢磨琢磨摆个姿势重念，好伐。
(Smile~Smile~Smile)
哈哈~乃吃鱼啦？【偷笑】
中午卡住 晚上才下去 那你下午是怎么过来的 好恐怖。。
(走到时间的尽头)
Jessica7624说：中午卡住 晚上才下去 那你下午是怎么过来的 好恐怖。。下午当然硬屏着 我这么man的！
闪烁的金莎说：下午当然硬屏着 我这么man的！硬是被你含化了么=。=
(走到时间的尽头)
uusaino说：亲爱的，我今天也给阿泽凑了个讲解音频，你听一遍，然后琢磨琢磨摆个姿势重念，好伐。亲爱的UU姐 我也要音频点评（不管不管 我就要 发嗲中）好了正常点 我每次听完讲解音频都练习好久的 还一遍遍跟读呢 今天上午又奉献给慢V 在语调上完全模仿的你的音频 话说昨天录的时候 只有某小编b的音频参照
(走到时间的尽头)
Jessica7624说：硬是被你含化了么=。=还没化..我还在硬屏中..不过好像不是那么痛了..(是不是我快挂了)
闪烁的金莎说：还没化..我还在硬屏中..不过好像不是那么痛了..(是不是我快挂了)估计被划破了么 去医院吧
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
(闭关两年~)
呃呃 真是进步得太多了吧
瞬间找不到破绽了
太不习惯了
非得揪出一毛病
poor的卷舌不够到位啊
被你念成了破~了 【对鸟
看楼上各种慰问
小渣也得表示表示
以后记得不要看见什么东西就吃
要检查他是否含有尖锐物
酱紫更保险
嗓子千万不要残废了
必要的话让美丽的护士或是医生姐姐看看 】
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
闪烁的金莎说：亲爱的UU姐 我也要音频点评（不管不管 我就要 发嗲中）好了正常点 我每次听完讲解音频都练习好久的 还一遍遍跟读呢 今天上午又奉献给慢V 在语调上完全模仿的你的音频 话说昨天录的时候 只有某小编b的音频参照[hjp3]hjptype=s...这遍太娘~~你快变大便娘娘了~！注意我说的练习那些弹、闪、快的短音之类的，我也说不好那些是啥音，反正就是不需要你拖拉不需要你读重的音，必须快的，闪的，这个很重要，对连读和连贯性起关键作用。
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
闪烁的金莎说：下午当然硬屏着 我这么man的！你吃鱼的时候废话太多，不卡你卡谁~~~要是是鱼骨头就喝点醋吧，靠你的唾沫去化解，那得先把你自己给腐蚀发酵才行的~~~~
(走到时间的尽头)
uusaino说：你吃鱼的时候废话太多，不卡你卡谁~~~要是是鱼骨头就喝点醋吧，靠你的唾沫去化解，那得先把你自己给腐蚀发酵才行的~~~~是鱼骨头肿么可能卡的主我的喉咙...开玩喜吧...中午小饭店里我猜应该是用铁丝球洗的碗..掉落的小铁丝吧...
(慢V标V我回来啦。)
金莎童鞋吃东西心不在焉~明天才去医院。。。嗓子会变差的啦。。乃快点康复哈~保持磁性音~
(慢V标V我回来啦。)
闪烁的金莎说：亲爱的UU姐 我也要音频点评（不管不管 我就要 发嗲中）好了正常点 我每次听完讲解音频都练习好久的 还一遍遍跟读呢 今天上午又奉献给慢V 在语调上完全模仿的你的音频 话说昨天录的时候 只有某小编b的音频参照[hjp3]hjptype=s...发嗲成功 UU点评三条音频HAHHA~
(不喧哗 自有声)
闪烁的金莎说：亲爱的UU姐 我也要音频点评（不管不管 我就要 发嗲中）好了正常点 我每次听完讲解音频都练习好久的 还一遍遍跟读呢 今天上午又奉献给慢V 在语调上完全模仿的你的音频 话说昨天录的时候 只有某小编b的音频参照[hjp3]hjptype=s...你最近又换成本人头像我都忍着不说你了 你居然还是有事没事非要以一种轻描淡写的嘲讽语气提我一句 这次居然都简化成某小编b了 以后是不是变成某b了
(不喧哗 自有声)
uusaino说：你吃鱼的时候废话太多，不卡你卡谁~~~要是是鱼骨头就喝点醋吧，靠你的唾沫去化解，那得先把你自己给腐蚀发酵才行的~~~~这也太不公平了! 以前还能偶尔被uu姐翻牌 现在完全等于打入冷宫了么! 话说之前超崇拜你那种感觉 但还是决定放弃 我的嗓子就他妈的注定没法高贵冷艳! 于是我又恢复了之前中气十足的感觉! 但我觉得嗓子没有很用力了 我感觉比之前温柔可人路线的话我读起来更舒服一点! 就很自然嘛!而且录得时候明明觉得声音还蛮正常的 结果录下来就爆响我靠!我又没有扎马步用丹田发声 怎么会这么中气十足! uu姐再帮我看看嘛~PS：醋是没用的 我试过 真的没用 真的
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
bilibili233说：这也太不公平了! 以前还能偶尔被uu姐翻牌 现在完全等于打入冷宫了么! 话说之前超崇拜你那种感觉 但还是决定放弃 我的嗓子就他妈的注定没法高贵冷艳! 于是我又恢复了之前中气十足的感觉! 但我觉得嗓子没有很用力了 我感觉比之前温柔可人路线的话...收到！
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bilibili233说：你最近又换成本人头像我都忍着不说你了 你居然还是有事没事非要以一种轻描淡写的嘲讽语气提我一句 这次居然都简化成某小编b了 以后是不是变成某b了某b一刚 弄娘唔哪能嘎刚 唔是个钟宁啊 唔都么弄嘎粗矿
(走到时间的尽头)
bilibili233说：这也太不公平了! 以前还能偶尔被uu姐翻牌 现在完全等于打入冷宫了么! 话说之前超崇拜你那种感觉 但还是决定放弃 我的嗓子就他妈的注定没法高贵冷艳! 于是我又恢复了之前中气十足的感觉! 但我觉得嗓子没有很用力了 我感觉比之前温柔可人路线的话...没看过宫廷剧还不知道一代新人胜旧人么.. 娘冬菜要么 借唔额地盘撒娇一刚 还有 种宁天生肺大 肺活量也大 嗓门也大 弄还欢喜在读一段音频前大吸一口气 伐要帮唔伐相信 自噶仔细七听听看 弄个这声音我倒是郭着在温柔克柔和高贵冷艳两种额中点 离高贵冷艳更噶近一滴
(不喧哗 自有声)
闪烁的金莎说：某b一刚 弄娘唔哪能嘎刚 唔是个钟宁啊 唔都么弄嘎粗矿 不要用粗犷这个词形容我 我不喜欢这样 我偏向于狂野
(英音？美音？confused！)
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(绝对不熬夜，一定要早起)
念得好快，反应不过来捏，inside好像感觉i跟音频不大一样，渣渣路过~~~
(英音？美音？confused！)
再来一遍慢的~~
money听到了r音
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
Jessica7624说：money听到了r音犀利！~绝对的哈。
王源帅说：[hjp3]hjptype=song&player=5&file=http://d3./_3/a1f1-41cd-b10a-23f28d9807ef.mp3&backColor=...inside的ai,phone就是UU姐姐说的问题。:-) 中间声音哑了一下下
uusaino说：犀利！~绝对的哈。（羞涩中）坐等uu姐 43楼已在角落
(英音？美音？confused！)
Jessica7624说：money听到了r音好耳朵~~3
(英音？美音？confused！)
uusaino说：^ 3^
(英音？美音？confused！)
phoenix07001说：inside的ai,phone就是UU姐姐说的问题。:-) 中间声音哑了一下下嗯呐，好细心呢~~嘻嘻~
(英音？美音？confused！)
azelf说：帅懒羊羊~阿扎老师~你怎么换成了一个小嫩吉娃娃？~这是要实施造人计划么？
王源帅说：阿扎老师~你怎么换成了一个小嫩吉娃娃？~这是要实施造人计划么？是大耳狐的幼崽
(英音？美音？confused！)
azelf说：是大耳狐的幼崽哟西，我说这小娃怎么长的这么漂亮~哈哈~
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(ID是个问题)
[ðiz] 是以/z/结尾，乃发成this了； ['?ð?] /ð/没有发出来，听着像/l/；
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(mon petit )
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(闭关两年~)
阿巧亲~好亲切呀
我一初中同学
也被我叫做阿巧
嘻嘻~占楼鸟
(mon petit )
JIANJIA789说：阿巧亲~好亲切呀
我一初中同学
也被我叫做阿巧
嘻嘻~占楼鸟
不读哇 ~嘿嘿，已经提交了，你换了脑壳呀！
(闭关两年~)
刘巧2012说：嘿嘿，已经提交了，你换了脑壳呀！换皮了
被你发现鸟~
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1.family ly的发音/li/ 你读成了/l??/2.overcrowding crow的发音/krau/你读成了/kraun/ 就是ao念成了ang的赶脚3.letting 字母e的发音/?/ 你读成了/e?/4.最后一句话里的prisoners单词的重音注意钦此 亲可起身接旨了~
(mon petit )
闪烁的金莎说：1.family ly的发音/li/ 你读成了/l??/2.overcrowding crow的发音/krau/你读成了/kraun/ 就是ao念成了ang的赶脚3.letting 字母e的发音/?/ 你读成了/e?/4.最后一句话里...艾玛！好专业！THX
(慢V标V我回来啦。)
抢楼easy，练习加油~He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods. 首先these this之前小编提醒过的，再次念错了，不过至少这次知道自己念错啦，以后一定改~things不知道是不是依然舌头在发音 应该是口腔后部发音 上次UU的幽默点评记忆犹新啊~$300与dollar之间明显不该停顿但是要换气 这次原谅自己~from\'fr?m, 'främ also f?m\ 为神马一直觉得是发反C的音 碎碎念 倒e音。。越来越发现这些单词出现频率好高：he other。。。。
(走到时间的尽头)
小tracy晚上好哇~明天可以睡懒觉啦~1.operation 这个单词字母o的发音要注意下 美音和英音有小的区别 我记得上次谁戳我的来着?英音 /?/ /呕/ 美音 /ɑ/ 贴近于 /啊/
2.guard /gɑrd/ 那个r的音漏了 类似于 /耳/以上为金小莎中文象声词之美音发音法版权所有~
(慢V标V我回来啦。)
闪烁的金莎说：小tracy晚上好哇~明天可以睡懒觉啦~1.operation 这个单词字母o的发音要注意下 美音和英音有小的区别 我记得上次谁戳我的来着?英音 /?/ /呕/ 美音 /ɑ/ 贴近于 /啊/
2.guard /gɑrd/ 那个r的音漏...金小莎之中文象声词美音发音点评收到~哈~ 额 偶这两点不该犯错~
(Smile~Smile~Smile)
tracy中午好~一个小问题~resources中的最后的e读/?/，uu有提到~
闪烁的金莎说：小tracy晚上好哇~明天可以睡懒觉啦~1.operation 这个单词字母o的发音要注意下 美音和英音有小的区别 我记得上次谁戳我的来着?英音 /?/ /呕/ 美音 /ɑ/ 贴近于 /啊/
2.guard /gɑrd/ 那个r的音漏...她的guards 应该发的是or的音 不像是r音漏了
(闭关两年~)
小渣点评酱来啦
表示不找到问题决不罢休
除了楼上的亲说的以外
我还听出两点
1：dollars的s被乃华丽丽的吃掉了
2：cell[s?l] 读的有点像搜~ l的音发的不清楚
【乃的卷舌读得真棒
自己惨死卷舌很多年
往事不堪回首撒】
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
(慢V标V我回来啦。)
我是新手哦说：tracy中午好~一个小问题~resources中的最后的e读/?/，uu有提到~这个我还真没发现 这下知道啦
(慢V标V我回来啦。)
Jessica7624说：她的guards 应该发的是or的音 不像是r音漏了 恩 估计是单词声音往下压就变or音了 ~ UU也提到了 下次注意· jessica晚安~
(慢V标V我回来啦。)
JIANJIA789说：小渣点评酱来啦
表示不找到问题决不罢休
除了楼上的亲说的以外
我还听出两点
1：dollars的s被乃华丽丽的吃掉了
2：cell[s?l] 读的有点像搜~ l的音发的不清楚
【乃的卷舌读得真棒
自己...dollars那个我就没想到要加S
哈哈 被你发现啦·
卷舌其实是我的自豪音 不过UU说我卷舌还要卷一点
额 努力中~
(慢V标V我回来啦。)
uusaino说：[flv]听得出来UU感冒啦 多多喝开水啦~话说楼上音频里听到你家小宝宝说话好可爱的声音·
晚安咯~嘿嘿 练习的目的就是进步嘛~努力中~加上小编们点评都这么认真仔细~1. 恩，语音语调培养语感在尽量模仿中~2. says的s
operation的o发a音
lack of已经注意到发倒e了估计发的不太明显，这个要点记住了
resources最后的e是发倒e 今天知道了
can的an发音音调
prisoners发音不能省音节
3. 美音味道不足 这个音节细节和语调正在改进中噢~好多要点
~ UU 晚安~
(再近一点~~)
(须菩提，所谓佛法者，即非佛法)
火星弟 动作够快啊
(再近一点~~)
1He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods
(再近一点~~)
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
(再喝一杯咖啡吧)
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
今天9点40不到就蹲守着，还是只排到14楼，前排好拥挤啊。
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
娃娃奋起的路好艰辛啊。。。~~~~(&_&)~~~~
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
偶能不能不要这么忙啊。。。。嗷嗷嗷。。。。
operations掉了s 还有这个letting好像有点点问题，别的没有听出来了。小渣渣再次灰过~加油~！Fighting!
感觉到了进步，整体感觉比较好，保持这种宏观的优势，不仅可以让你有自信，还可以让你在真正交流时候很顺畅！ 微观来讲，还有一点点小问题：1.support中的port元音读偏了；2.need的n读成偏l了；3.suffer的er读偏了；4.lack请读梅花音
管家姐姐再接再厉吧！我很看好你哟！
(闭关两年~)
涟漪ly说：operations掉了s 还有这个letting好像有点点问题，别的没有听出来了。小渣渣再次灰过~加油~！Fighting!咦~你也是小渣渣
看来我得换皮了 重皮就不好了
换什么好呢？？？努力冥想
除了楼上的亲说的 and要么梅花音要么倒e的音
不是乃的asupport 的o就是哦
不是欧serving要咬唇哦three要咬舌
你也是在嘴里抖落下就发出来鸟goods还可以读得快一点轻一点不要拖
嘻嘻~亲~你读的还是很棒的
语调不错呀
涟漪ly说：operations掉了s 还有这个letting好像有点点问题，别的没有听出来了。小渣渣再次灰过~加油~！Fighting!恩呢、、的确哦。。。谢谢了。。。
phoenix07001说：感觉到了进步，整体感觉比较好，保持这种宏观的优势，不仅可以让你有自信，还可以让你在真正交流时候很顺畅！ 微观来讲，还有一点点小问题：1.support中的port元音读偏了；2.need的n读成偏l了；3.suffer的er读偏了；4.la...好的。。。果然看了别人指出来，偶才能发觉啊，，~~~~(>__<)~~~~
JIANJIA789说：咦~你也是小渣渣
看来我得换皮了 重皮就不好了
换什么好呢？？？努力冥想
除了楼上的亲说的 and要么梅花音要么倒e的音
不是乃的asupport 的o就是哦
不是欧serving要咬唇哦three要咬舌 ...恩恩。。谢谢乃。。。偶下次会注意这些问题啊。。偶的元音和L,N不分的问题存在已久啊。。。~~~~(>_<)~~~~ ，，偶会慢慢克服的。。
JIANJIA789说：咦~你也是小渣渣
看来我得换皮了 重皮就不好了
换什么好呢？？？努力冥想
除了楼上的亲说的 and要么梅花音要么倒e的音
不是乃的asupport 的o就是哦
不是欧serving要咬唇哦three要咬舌 ...啊 不对 我是小渣渣渣渣
嗯，就这样了 再次灰过~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
：He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
求点评~O(∩_∩)O谢谢~
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
咳咳，，，乃进步很大的说。。。就是有时候那个单词词尾读音读轻一点，比如can 't的t音啊。。偶听着乃就是每句话快结束时候乃的调就赶脚特意往上扬一样，，所以调调有点奇怪。。。纯属个人意见。乃可以多听原音频，话说偶的也不行，，，不过。。加油啊
枫青古月说：咳咳，，，乃进步很大的说。。。就是有时候那个单词词尾读音读轻一点，比如can 't的t音啊。。偶听着乃就是每句话快结束时候乃的调就赶脚特意往上扬一样，，所以调调有点奇怪。。。纯属个人意见。乃可以多听原音频，话说偶的也不行，，，不过。。加油啊谢谢！！恩我读的时候没感觉录下来以后确实有点怪怪的T T努力跟自己的习惯做斗争Ing……共勉！！
(须菩提，所谓佛法者，即非佛法)
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
({^-(oo)-^7}000007)
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今天沙发亲的闹钟没电了吗...
({^-(oo)-^7}000007)
闪烁的金莎说：今天沙发亲的闹钟没电了吗...看好声音看过头了，手机闹钟也顾不上了0.0
小筱瑾说：看好声音看过头了，手机闹钟也顾不上了0.0同看好声音 直接霸气的关了电脑╮(╯▽╰)╭
(闭关两年~)
Jessica7624说：同看好声音 直接霸气的关了电脑╮(╯▽╰)╭噗
杰西卡~怪不得~我以为你今天不来鸟
顿时就好桑感
然后就把自己的楼删了
因为真的特烦躁~老读错~之后又看到你来了
然后我就来了~
JIANJIA789说：噗
杰西卡~怪不得~我以为你今天不来鸟
顿时就好桑感
然后就把自己的楼删了
因为真的特烦躁~老读错~之后又看到你来了
然后我就来了~(⊙o⊙)…这对我是多大的肯定啊~~ 羞涩死了
(初心を忘れず。)
为什么写1的人那么多orz
(闭关两年~)
快！阿泽小编~你
也来凑热闹了= =。
(绝对不熬夜，一定要早起)
因为想抢到第一吧，嘿嘿~
(英音？美音？confused！)
都以为可以抢到沙发，结果~~沙发太少了~~哈，在标v待久了来慢v果然不适应~~
(初心を忘れず。)
JIANJIA789说：快！阿泽小编~你
也来凑热闹了= =。嘿嘿，我其实是隐身了的，怎么被你发现了！！
(初心を忘れず。)
freedomsyj说：因为想抢到第一吧，嘿嘿~嘿，我也这么想。不过会不会是因为1比较好打捏？
(初心を忘れず。)
王源帅说：都以为可以抢到沙发，结果~~沙发太少了~~哈，在标v待久了来慢v果然不适应~~那就一天跑这边，一天跑那边呗，切换太快会不会头晕啊orz
岩见泽说：嘿，我也这么想。不过会不会是因为1比较好打捏？在我看来是的
(再喝一杯咖啡吧)
因为写2有点那个。。
(初心を忘れず。)
lwkua说：因为写2有点那个。。哈哈哈哈，笑死我了我去！
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
好听的声音，你的发声习惯让你的英文听起来非常生动，非常洋气，但是很多单词的读法上还需要再修正，模棱两可的态度决定了你的很多单词也读的模棱两可似像非像，最好锻炼方式就是查词典模仿，而且一定是要熟读。另外听出了一些中式感的发音，注意舌头的位置尽量往后，单词的纠正发音可能暂时来说比较重要，矫正好了，估计会变得好洋气好native的。
uusaino说：好听的声音，你的发声习惯让你的英文听起来非常生动，非常洋气，但是很多单词的读法上还需要再修正，模棱两可的态度决定了你的很多单词也读的模棱两可似像非像，最好锻炼方式就是查词典模仿，而且一定是要熟读。另外听出了一些中式感的发音，注意舌头的位置...谢谢 uusaino 的鼓励及指正。1）似像非像》》查词典》》熟读。这个做的不够，除了查生词外。顺便问一下，为什么不HJ推荐金生词霸？韦氏音标是我的第三套英语音标了，还没学会。2）中式发音》》舌头靠后。这个念快了，本来面目就出来了，非一日之功啊尚需努力!
(做一个物质与精神都强大的女汉纸~)
首先，我得表示一下我激动的心情。。。终于从30+变成了20+，Yeah!~~
其次，我的麦克风好像出了点问题，有些音会被莫名其妙的吃掉！我试了好多遍，都是这样。。。TT TT
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(走到时间的尽头)
撒花 Top20不是梦~(⊙o⊙)…收录的效果不是最好 不过不能掩盖亲这花挥啊 用东北话说就是杠杠的~
(做一个物质与精神都强大的女汉纸~)
闪烁的金莎说：撒花 Top20不是梦~(⊙o⊙)…收录的效果不是最好 不过不能掩盖亲这花挥啊 用东北话说就是杠杠的~恩恩，好的也！~^-^
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.先改发音，再该语调，最后改语速
(闭关两年~)
读的时候声音好柔软呀
你的嗓子一定是用了金纺
亲~呃呃 正题
1：family 的尾音没有后鼻音
serving的咬唇还可以最的更好些
表示没听出来你咬唇 3：corruption这个词的卡带是什么情况？4：
a lack of resources踩尾巴鸟
具体怎么治
问41楼的亲 5：three要咬舌
赶脚你就是舌头在嘴里抖了一下~然后音就出来了
6：banned读得不到位
嘴巴张大点哟7：goods的u不要读的太长
在轻快一点会好些
【小渣就听出这些
还有phones 的s 你给漏了
JIANJIA789说：读的时候声音好柔软呀
你的嗓子一定是用了金纺
亲~呃呃 正题
1：family 的尾音没有后鼻音
serving的咬唇还可以最的更好些
表示没听出来你咬唇 3：corruption这个词的卡...family,
有点拖音了。
serving，我会再改进。
corruption老是和后面的operation的oper混读.
resources读的有点急，发音不清。three确实读的差了点。谢谢你的指点，我会继续努力。
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(滴水石穿，聚沙成塔)
再次来晚o(╯□╰)o
(初心を忘れず。)
孩子，你这水平算二环了已经很好了好麻？
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
岩见泽说：孩子，你这水平算二环了已经很好了好麻？上海这边是外环内环~~~怎么都算碰到环了，不错不错了。
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
岩见泽说：孩子，你这水平算二环了已经很好了好麻？哈哈泥垢啥意思？
(走到时间的尽头)
uusaino说：哈哈泥垢啥意思？我刚刚去百度了下 就是你够了的意思...带咆哮状
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
overcrowding读错了 还有好多
(愿你被世界温柔以待)
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
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He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods. 感觉嘴都读僵了，还是不行，prison 和 prisoner 越读越不对~~~
(绝对不熬夜，一定要早起)
亲，早上好，其实我只是来串门的~~~pay好像有pray的赶脚，300 dollors好像木有s，渣渣飞过~~
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoner. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods. 是不是一定要卖个萌什么的才能被搭理啊~~~
(怎样成为一个正直的人)
卖呀~你卖呀~~~坐等层主卖萌~~
(闭关两年~)
东仔lest说：卖呀~你卖呀~~~坐等层主卖萌~~噗
为什么各种猥琐？楼主别理他
东仔叔今天脑子有点秀逗~~~
(怎样成为一个正直的人)
擦~~幸福来的太快了~~40楼以内了~~~
(闭关两年~)
噗 ~ 猥琐的本质~
(怎样成为一个正直的人)
JIANJIA789说：噗 ~ 猥琐的本质~更猥琐的是我准备今天光占楼~~~哈哈哈~~早安~~~
(慢V标V我回来啦。)
批评东东 光占楼 明天继续努力哟~
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoner. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(绝对不熬夜，一定要早起)
层主声音好有磁性，好吧，其实偶是打酱油的，不要鄙视偶~
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoner. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(李光洙头像又回来了)
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoner. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
我情不自禁说一声：UU姐姐读得真好，讲解的也很好很好！ 阿泽同学，快点好起来吧，我真心觉得你应该制定个健身计划！冷笑话不错，以后我们就叫你 “冷笑话娘娘阿泽”或者简称“冷娘阿泽”？
这次的好很多诶 没有全篇卷舌的感觉了 继续奋斗一下 就可以摆脱咯~~these things
these咬舌不到位 舌头伸出来 伸出来~~
咳咳，，偶隐约听见乃把pay读成play??不过道道乃可以。。。恩恩。。O(∩_∩)O哈哈~帮偶揪揪错吧。。。偶在15楼。。。O(∩_∩)O哈哈~
Jessica7624说：这次的好很多诶 没有全篇卷舌的感觉了 继续奋斗一下 就可以摆脱咯~~these things
these咬舌不到位 舌头伸出来 伸出来~~杰西卡你真的好棒哟！
枫青古月说：咳咳，，偶隐约听见乃把pay读成play??不过道道乃可以。。。恩恩。。O(∩_∩)O哈哈~帮偶揪揪错吧。。。偶在15楼。。。O(∩_∩)O哈哈~呵呵，月月姐姐，你的头像让我很想吐槽啊！嗯。立马15去逛逛！
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
读的很好，能听出你在尽力模仿尽力注意一些细节，很棒的哈~~~就是稍微熟练度上欠缺了一点，不过我还是觉得细节决定一切，熟练度慢慢会上去的。小细节我就不说了，很多是瑕疵，可能是你忙不过来了哈哈。
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoner. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
最近又把越狱看了一遍 监狱里面真的是这种样子的咩。。？
(闭关两年~)
表示听了两遍
找不出骨头
而且还发现自己有些地方没有连读
杰西卡亲~ 小渣渣快去屎吧
我在你楼下 TAT
JIANJIA789说：表示听了两遍
找不出骨头
而且还发现自己有些地方没有连读
杰西卡亲~ 小渣渣快去屎吧
我在你楼下 TAT难得一次被放过了 （其实我知道有好几个地方没读好 就是不告诉你）hiahiahiaa..
(走到时间的尽头)
肿么 有兴趣进去看看？
闪烁的金莎说：肿么 有兴趣进去看看？我看看就行 =。=
倒数第二句中earn卷的不够狠
phoenix07001说：倒数第二句中earn卷的不够狠被你发现了 ╮(╯▽╰)╭嘘~~
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
uusaino说：被uu姐表扬了 开心的不行不行的~！！$300那边读的不好我也知道 前面一句读完就没有换气一口气用完了 只好在那边断了 ╮(╯▽╰)╭所以啊 我是憋着气在读 憋着气啊~~~~(>_<)~~~~ 从刚刚开始来慢美的时候 一直有人说我到处卷舌 我就时时刻刻小心所以练到现在 可能发声部位不敢往后（一往后就不自觉的卷舌了）这个度 自己还没有找到 探索中~~最后 uu姐╭(╯3╰)╮╭(╯3╰)╮
(女王养成社)
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
渣音求指导~~~
good job!!!
小k。。。乃这水平让管姐如何下手去评？？？？一个字。。。棒。。。。咳咳，，偶实在挑不出来啊，，，，
(闭关两年~)
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods【诶诶
各种麦的问题
爆麦颤音加失真鉴于这是倒数第二天
小渣还是乖乖地交音频吧
让批判来得更猛烈些吧
真的练了很多遍呐
舌头各种打结
越读越烦躁我会说么
首先a lack of resources你又被踩尾巴了=。=th咬舌你自己肯定知道 我就不说啦~~serving V的咬唇不到位还有就是good这个音oo的发音不对不对 你再听听原音频 要是还是改不过来 我就上音频和你说
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
撇开单词不说，你的发音方式还是偏中式化，舌位前位，造成你的很多音发的很重，不够到位，不够轻，不够弹不够闪，这事可能我这么一说，你会一头雾水，总而言之，言而总之就是，舌头抵住上颚的中间部位，甚至更后去发t、d和各种卷舌的音，不要老去碰牙齿了，太前面了，你读的也累，还连贯性差，最重要，怎么修怎么改都感觉还是不好听~~是吧希望能给你点帮助。
(闭关两年~)
uusaino说：撇开单词不说，你的发音方式还是偏中式化，舌位前位，造成你的很多音发的很重，不够到位，不够轻，不够弹不够闪，这事可能我这么一说，你会一头雾水，总而言之，言而总之就是，舌头抵住上颚的中间部位，甚至更后去发t、d和各种卷舌的音，不要老去碰牙齿了，...谢谢小编亲~终于知道自己错在哪儿了= =。
(闭关两年~)
Jessica7624说：首先a lack of resources你又被踩尾巴了=。=th咬舌你自己肯定知道 我就不说啦~~serving V的咬唇不到位还有就是good这个音oo的发音不对不对 你再听听原音频 要是还是改不过来 我就上音频和你说【第二句又被踩尾巴自己听了笑了好多遍
发现自己的音频好有喜感~ 杰西卡亲
辛苦鸟~表示很快要军训
木有时间来慢美了呀
泪崩ing ~以后再来杰西卡都不认识我了我会说么
下次来千万要一眼就看出我丫
反正我记住你了
泥垢了 有必要这么鸡冻么？】
以排山倒海之势 送你十个彩虹条。。（你以为我是发神经了么）网速不给力啊 死活传不上音频 我还特地跑去下了个音频切割的软件把这段反反复复切了N次=。= 这才一点点的都传上来了（容易么我）
Jessica7624说：以排山倒海之势 送你十个彩虹条。。（你以为我是发神经了么）网速不给力啊 死活传不上音频 我还特地跑去下了个音频切割的软件把这段反反复复切了N次=。= 这才一点点的都传上来了（容易么我）杰西卡，好强大啊你！
Jessica7624说：[hjp3]hjptype=song&player=5&file=http://d3./_3/0-42cb-99d9-6a809fa0a8d6.mp3&backColor=...到处找你？还是有发展空间滴？发生什么了额？
phoenix07001说：杰西卡，好强大啊你！哈哈 这是一个浩大的工程
phoenix07001说：到处找你？还是有发展空间滴？发生什么了额？啊？什么发生什么了(⊙o⊙)…
发现音频其中几个有问题 有一段怎么重复说了好几遍(⊙o⊙)…是系统的问题么
(闭关两年~)
Jessica7624说：发现音频其中几个有问题 有一段怎么重复说了好几遍(⊙o⊙)…是系统的问题么
(闭关两年~)
Jessica7624说：发现音频其中几个有问题 有一段怎么重复说了好几遍(⊙o⊙)…是系统的问题么 的确哈
我以为你是每次都强调下
后来发觉是每句话都是一样的
原来是系统问题
或是其他神马的
不管这个鸟 ~哇塞
其实我家网速也很渣的
不过似乎比你的要好点
上传了几次失败鸟
又想摔麦摔键盘
~~~提交了大概十几分钟
就是酱紫滴
JIANJIA789说：的确哈
我以为你是每次都强调下
后来发觉是每句话都是一样的
原来是系统问题
或是其他神马的
不管这个鸟 ~哇塞
其实我家网速也很渣的
不过似乎比你的要好点
上传了几次失败...感动吧 hiahiahiaaaa~~~（叉腰大笑三分钟）每次录音我也会读很多很多遍的 这是常态=。= 嘘~~不要说出来小编不也说的嘛 不超过20遍 怎么可以上音频捏~
(大鼻音是因为鼻炎~天天感冒不像话啦~)
Jessica7624说：哈哈 这是一个浩大的工程你们两好给力，小沙是谁啊，山姆大叔是谁，我也要去学~~~~
uusaino说：你们两好给力，小沙是谁啊，山姆大叔是谁，我也要去学~~~~小莎是闪烁的金莎 山姆大叔嘛 就是Uncle Sam也就是US啦~~
(闭关两年~)
Jessica7624说：感动吧 hiahiahiaaaa~~~（叉腰大笑三分钟）每次录音我也会读很多很多遍的 这是常态=。= 嘘~~不要说出来小编不也说的嘛 不超过20遍 怎么可以上音频捏~我家电脑真是更新慢
为什么现在才看到TAT
我也要神回复！哇咔咔
嘻嘻~就是很容易满足
被你这么认真的点评很感动我会说么
是 thanks~
(闭关两年~)
Jessica7624说：感动吧 hiahiahiaaaa~~~（叉腰大笑三分钟）每次录音我也会读很多很多遍的 这是常态=。= 嘘~~不要说出来小编不也说的嘛 不超过20遍 怎么可以上音频捏~为神马你的点评总是不会出现在消息里
总是会错过
如果不是我深信杰西卡会给我点评就不会老来刷慢美了
JIANJIA789说：为神马你的点评总是不会出现在消息里
总是会错过
如果不是我深信杰西卡会给我点评就不会老来刷慢美了
这个我就不清楚了 今天的点评就这样吧 再这么继续刷屏 我都不好意思(╯﹏╰)b
(闭关两年~)
Jessica7624说：这个我就不清楚了 今天的点评就这样吧 再这么继续刷屏 我都不好意思(╯﹏╰)b还点评的话就说明我体无完肤了
读的渣到爆了
深知录音辛苦
小渣也是这么过来的鸟
又听了几遍你的讲解
声音不萌不御
好好听~我就喜欢这样的舒服的声音
(请叫我傻&#215;先生)
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoner. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods. 语音语调每次都读得那么奇怪，真纠结囧
咳咳，，乃的背景乐好丰富啊。。。语调奇怪因为一方面乃口音的问题，还是就是元音神马的口型木有张开，发的不到位导致的，而且乃好多单词发音都不对啊亲。。。还有乃的断句很有问题的说，断的不对啊。。一个意群断一下，比如乃第一句话，t 和pay 竟然连了。pay for是一个词组啊，另外乃单词好多发的不对啊，serving 的v 地方咬唇啥的suffer中元音不对，from就明显带了家乡音进去了overcrowing的crow发不对，operation中ra地方不对，好吧。。其他后面就不多说了，，总之。。加油哈。。
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
译文：他（利奥普德·苏达佑诺）说那些支付不起这些东西或者是没有家庭帮助的囚犯需要在监狱里服侍其他的囚犯。印度尼西亚的监狱腐败、拥挤、经营不善且缺乏资源。监狱看守每月赚300美元。他们还能靠允许囚犯使用手机及其他违禁物品而获利。
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
小编辛苦了
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoner. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoner. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoner. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
读的不好，今天也是鼻炎很严重，一边流鼻涕一边读，画面感强么
(ID是个问题)
俺也感冒了，所以都木有录示范音频%&_&% ['?&#240;?] 感觉把/&#240;/发成/z/了
终于知道怎么把音频放上来了...折腾了半个多小时啊...
(ID是个问题)
不容易~中间的do木发出来； [l&#230;k] 发成了lake；最后一句have貌似发成了 has读的蛮流畅，细节多用点心~
金荷娜说：不容易~中间的do木发出来； [l&#230;k] 发成了lake；最后一句have貌似发成了 has读的蛮流畅，细节多用点心~每次读都好像嘴里含着东西，读不清楚呢....细节下次会多注意！多谢点评~！我以为这就沉下去了呢，哈哈o(∩_∩)o
(大爱沪江)
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoner. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(大爱沪江)
不知道会不会点评到。。但是我终于会传音频了，谢谢道道道 ^-^
哇塞，居然提到我名字了，开心一下。嗯，首先要欢迎新同学，^_^。 第一次传音频能读这么好，很不错哟！1.says /sez/,let/let/都读得有点偏 ei，稍微注意一下；2.很多元音读得太“微弱”，其实可以夸张点点！赞一个，再接再厉，我很看好你哟！
补充点点，Indonesian不要读成Indonesia就正如Asian不能读成Asia；发音方式比较靠前，所以会导致好像元音读得不够饱满、漂亮！
(大爱沪江)
phoenix07001说：哇塞，居然提到我名字了，开心一下。嗯，首先要欢迎新同学，^_^。 第一次传音频能读这么好，很不错哟！1.says /sez/,let/let/都读得有点偏 ei，稍微注意一下；2.很多元音读得太“微弱”，其实可以夸张点点！赞一个，再接...是哦，读的不够夸张。我要好好注意这点。 练习 练习 练习……谢谢道道~~
(努力补回扔了三年的英语。。泣きたい)
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoner. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(ID是个问题)
s的发音是浊辅音/z/，不要发成/s/；[k?'r?p??n]
不是; /v/注意咬下唇；['ris?rsiz]
复数结尾发成/iz/不是/ez/；[?n] 乃发成了;
(努力补回扔了三年的英语。。泣きたい)
金荷娜说：['pr?zn]
s的发音是浊辅音/z/，不要发成/s/；[k?'r?p??n]
不是;[wv]overcrowding[/...v这个音老是发不好 总是会忘了要咬唇
努力练习中居然读错了这么多个词都没有发现 去面壁一下谢谢点评啦
mua! (*╯3╰)
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoner. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(ID是个问题)
好长的音频条~发音问题不大，注意一下原因再发的饱满一点比如的/&#230;/嘴型再张大一点；的/ai/；另外就是卷舌音的部分还可以再练习一下
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoner. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoner. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods. 望老师多多指点！！
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
老师讲的真好 可惜我是个笨学生 只能慢慢跟上啦
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
(Time is money. )
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
译文：他（利奥普德·苏达佑诺）说那些支付不起这些东西或者是没有家庭帮助的囚犯需要在监狱里服侍其他的囚犯。印度尼西亚的监狱腐败、拥挤、经营不善且缺乏资源。监狱看守每月赚300美元。他们还能靠允许囚犯使用手机及其他违禁物品而获利。
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods. 译文：他（利奥普德·苏达佑诺）说那些支付不起这些东西或者是没有家庭帮助的囚犯需要在监狱里服侍其他的囚犯。印度尼西亚的监狱腐败、拥挤、经营不善且缺乏资源。监狱看守每月赚300美元。他们还能靠允许囚犯使用手机及其他违禁物品而获利。 帮我指出错误啊。谢谢、
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
He says prisoners who can't pay for these things and who don't have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.
He says prisoners who can&#39;t pay for these things and who don&#39;t have family support need to work inside prison serving other prisoners. Indonesian prisons suffer from corruption, overcrowding, poor operations and a lack of resources. Prison guards earn about $300 a month. They can also make money by letting prisoners have cell phones and other banned goods.译文：他（利奥普德&#183;苏达佑诺）说那些支付不起这些东西或者是没有家庭帮助的囚犯需要在监狱里服侍其他的囚犯。印度尼西亚的监狱腐败、拥挤、经营不善且缺乏资源。监狱看守每月赚300美元。他们还能靠允许囚犯使用手机及其他违禁物品而获利。
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